Monday 4 January 2010

Pitch

Idea 1:

Our first idea was that there is a young boy who is very popular in high school he gets all the girls, his funny, very attractive, plays football, his the typical ideal boyfriend for a high school girl. We decided that he would start to date 3 of the most popular girls in the school who are best friends and eventually there other friends told the girls when they found out that the boy there dating is dating all of them. The 3 popular girls then became arch enemies, and wanted to hurt each other. The hate they had turned into a big argument over face book until one of the girls said lets talk on msn and sort this out properley. So they did and when they spoke on msn they decided there not going to fight over a boy and made a plan to get him back. The ways the girls try to get the boy back are very humorous and they never seem to go right. In the end the boy gets the girls back for trying to get him in the first place by dating there best friend.

Idea 2:

Our second idea was that there is a very pretty boy, who’s sweet, and knows how to talk to the ladies, he gets all the attention he needs and he has a best friend who’s not so pretty. He knows he can get any girl he likes so he uses it to his advantage. And one day his at a party, he sees a girl he is very attached to and he begins to like her. He then realises that she doesn’t like him and his determined to prove his friend that he can get her because there’s not one girl he can not get. He begins to do anything and everything for this girl until he gets to the point where he thinks she really does just not like him. He then goes to another party, and the girl secretly is beginning to like him. She also turns up to the party and she sees him kissing another girl. Just when she was about to tell him how she felt she saw this and she ends up heartbroken and runs out the party where he then chases her, and try’s his best to get her before its too late...

Idea 3:

There’s a couple and there a couple everyone in the college knows about, every boy fancies the girl and would want her has a girlfriend and most girls would love to date the boy, the relationship is going well and nothing can really in the way. One day in the college a new boy arrives and has in the same class has the girl the teacher puts them together to work on a project and they start to talk. The boy begins to like the girl not knowing that the girl has a boyfriend. Not just any boyfriend at that 'The Top Boy' boyfriend. The girl’s boyfriend seems to clock on that the new boy likes her and he warns his girlfriend to make him know before its too late, the new boy then tells the girl that he likes her and she tells him he can’t because she’s no good for him. The girl’s boyfriend sees the girl and new boy talking about this and his holding her hand, the girl’s boyfriend tells the girl she has to set him up so he can deal with him. She refuses as she slowly falling for him but she refuses to tell her boyfriend that. The boyfriend and girl split up has he threatens her to do so, and she continues to refuse, the boyfriend try’s to get back with the girl in humorous ways before the new boy gets her...

Idea 4:

(Main Idea)

Characters Boys:
Kymani - 17, Black Hair, Brown Eyes, Mixed Race.
Khairi - 17, Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Mixed Race.
Kieran 17, Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Mixed Race.

Girls:
Chyante - 16, Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Mixed Race.
Courtney - 16, Black Hair, Brown Eyes, Mixed Race.
Cassandra - 16, Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Mixed Race.

The story is based in Kymani's house. Kymani and Chyante are brother and sister. Chyante is Kymanis younger sister who he is very protective over no boys can talk to her in a relationship way, and the 3 boys, Kymani, Khiri and Kieran who are best friends make sure of this. The 3 boys are best friends they class each other as family because there so tight, nothing and no one can come in between them, there all very good looking boys who get any girls they want, they have no respect for girls and they all use the same chat up lines on the girls which is how they get girls. The 3 boys know each other inside out. Where as with the 3 girls their also best friends they tell each other everything. The storyline is that basically Khiri, Kymani and Kieran are in Kymanis rooms getting ready to go out to a party, whilst there getting ready they fail to realise that Chyante and her friends are also getting ready to go to a party. Because the boys are so intrigued by the phone calls there getting from girls they don’t pay any attention to the girls that night. The boys are in Kymanis room and there phones begin to ring they all run to the phones and answer it, the screen would then split into 3 and we would see and hear the way the boys talk to girls. They then come off the phone and we see them talking and making jokes until Khiris thirsty and he decides he wants a drink and goes out the bedroom to get one, whilst he is about to do this, Chyantes secretly sneaking out her room to grab her mascara from the bathroom, when she turns around from closing her door Khiris standing in front of her and he asks her where she thinks she going dressed like that. She replies, once they have there talk, eventually Khiri tells her she looks beautiful and she can’t believe he said that to her and he cant believe he did either after, they both freeze and walk off to where they were going in the first place. Slowly has the days pass, they begin to see each other secretly and begin to like each other allot however the 3boys know that if there’s anything they cant do in there click is date or have a relationship with a family member. So for Khiri and Chyante to be seeing each other and Kymani finding out will cause some serious problems. The boys have a sleepover the week later at Kymanis house and Chyantes in her room whilst the boys fall asleep after playing play station and smoking Khiris still awake and sneaks into Chyantes room, they kiss and hug and talk about them until Kieran wakes up and sees them together whilst he’s on his way to the bathroom. Kieran gets mad and start arguing with Khiri but eventually calms down as they talk about it, and decide not to tell Kymani. But has they continue to see each other and get more serious, Chyante feels she wants to tell her brother has she doesn’t want to hide from him anymore. They tell him and after fighting and arguments they sort it out and he lets them be on one condition that he treats her right and drops every other girl on his line.

Opening Sequence:

The opening scene begins where we see a long shot of the house, you hear non diegetic music start which is played until dialogue is heard, the music is very lively, we then see a medium shot of feet running upstairs, we then see a close up of a girls lips in the mirror putting on her lip-gloss slowly, we then see a close-up of a girls eye on the mirror putting on her mascara, the shot then changes to a medium shot of a spliff being rolled up by a boy, and a bed with a mobile phone on it and magazines and play station pads. We then see an extreme close up on the phone ringing with a girls name on the screen, the non diegtic music then stops and we hear the ringing. A match on action the takes place where a hand picks up the phone and the screen splits into 3 where we see three different boys faces and they all say 'Yoooo' we hear them talking to the girls one by one, the scene then changes to a birds eye view on the girls room, where three girls are lying down and sitting on a bed and there talking reading magazines and getting ready at the same time. We then go back to the boy’s room and see Khiri getting up from the bed and he goes out the door to get a drink, we then see Chyante coming out of her room to get a drink. We then see a shot over the shoulder shot of them talking and then a medium shot of them walking away after. You can tell this is a rom-com because there is no violence in the beginning, the atmosphere is very loved up, and the music isn’t eerie, the bright background senses the happier effect than a dark background which symbolises a thriller or horror.

Character Analysis:

Kymanis the oldest, he’s very cheeky and hates being ignored. Out of the three boys his the one that can fight the best and always gets in arguments and fights over his sister.

Kieran’s the cleverest, he knows how to talk to the police when Kymani gets in trouble with them, he doesn’t smoke and he has manners, just not to girls.

Khairis the one who gets the most girls, he’s funny, the hyper, and the one who sorts out all the problems in the click.


Chyantes very pretty, she gets all the boys, which gets her brother angry, she’s polite and very clever, she likes to play netball, and loves celebrities and music.

Cassandra’s chyantes closest friend, she’s cute, she loves music and her hair, and she can’t live without her mobile phone. She’s very cheeky when she wants to be.

Courtney’s the 'ghetto' one who loves tracksuits and money, she’s also very pretty and gets boys, but she’s more interested in money and having a laugh with her girls.