Film Clip Made By Jaime Sugar & Karina Daniels 11/11/09

On the 11th of November 2009 me and my partner, Karina Daniels constructed a mini clip showing our camera skills and knowledge of different shots.
Overall the shots were very good and the whole clip made sense. Every shot was clear of what was being represented and the whole clip flowed from one sequence to the other. However one thing which I would change is to swap the panning shot of the area with character A walking up the ramp. People feedback said that it would of been better if the audience had none where character A was walking to before we saw him walking, on the other hand other viewers said that they prefer it the original way because it looks like a point of view shot.
Unfortunately because we filmed outside we had no control over the lighting, so in one shot when character A is walking towards the camera the lighting is very poor and it is difficult to see the character, however i think this creates a good effect because the darkness could represent the character walking into something bad / illegal.
We also had a lot of positive feedback especially for the shot reverse shot was was very accurate, another thing which was good was the match on action was flowed very well.